We saw all the adverts that we had made (that I mentioned in earlier posts). I definitely enjoyed seeing everyone’s. Our group was given some feedback for the advert that you can read below.
| Criteria/Content | Tick | Comments |
| Have they successfully used editing techniques to enhance the advert? | Yes and have used a lot of technical skills such as animations to help sell their product | |
| What do you think the strengths are of the advert? | Good camera angles, good voice overs and oov shots | |
| What constructive feedback can you suggest that would improve this advert? | Make it longer and include more facts about the crisps or include more of a narrative to create a story around the product |
| Is the product that is being advertised clear in the commercial? | It is shown a lot to reveal the brand identity | |
| Who is the target audience for the commercial, do you think the advert successfully appeals to the target audience, if so how have they done this? | The target audience are people possibly looking for a healthy snack or college students due to the location | |
| What form is the advert, how has this been made evident? | It is about crisps and this is made evident through the crisps flying across the screen |
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